Hmm...

I'd write something intelligent here, if I were feeling intelligent, but alas, I am not.

I think I spent most of my effort and intellectual points on revising Videotape today when I perhaps should have been paying attention during AP Bio. Oh well. I'm at the point where I'm fighting with myself over specific word choice, which I figure is pretty good for a story; if it were poetry, we'd be in another area, but we're not, so this is good. The last big thing I've got to deal with is shifting verb tense. I don't want to go entirely present-tense with this, but all past seems a bit dull too. I slip into present naturally in a few areas, and then drop out of it again, so I'll have to zoom back a bit and assess the whole thing to see where I want to go with that. Good lord, the writing contest deadline is getting quite close.